I’m writing a story. A novel. A book. A thing that won’t go away. A story that must be told.
I have a question of you.
What would you think of a book that begins?
Perhaps there is no story more difficult to tell than the one that changes all. Such a story gains its own life and becomes more than it was. Each person who is touched by the story adds their own part to the narrative, forever changing it and sending to places it has never been.
How to tell such a story?
You can’t, because once you tell it, you change – you become part of the narrative as the story bends slowly to you. The story is transient, ephemeral, ever decaying and ever growing.
The author of this tale is both you and I. It is told the way my children will learn about my life – in fragments, images, and with the ever evolving re-understanding of my past. It is a story reflected in a shattered crystal, multifaceted, fragmented, and yet a reminder that perfection once existed.
Would you turn to chapter one?
I REALLY like the 4th paragraph. That was the hook for me. Now this is coming from someone who has never written a thing beside my blog, but I think that should be first. It startles you and then you find yourself nodding in agreement. And wanting to know more. Hey – you asked…
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Thank you – putting that paragraph first makes sense.
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Absolutely. I can usually decide in the first few lines whether I will like a book or the writing style of the author
For me, I would stop after to ask the question of how to tell such a story. The hook before the first chapter, or second. But that’s just me.
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It’s all about hooking the reader to carry on to the next chapter.
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Yes! Your writing style is lovely – the mystery and the story-telling rhythm draws me in immediately.
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Thanks. I now need to make sure the story meets the promise of the intro.
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That’s always the hard part! 🙂
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Ummm……..YES!!
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typing as fast as I can … 😉
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Absolutely
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Thanks – the book should be ready in a year or three. 😉
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Yes, I would. You have told us that the story will change the reader and so I am curious as to what the story is. Good luck! 🙂
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That’s the question – what story? I actual wrote this for one book, but am now thinking of using for a different book. The question is, “will my story meet this promise?”
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Yes, of course, although this line threw me a bit: The author of this tale is both you and I.
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You caught my little literary theory bit – while a write can write a story, the meaning of the story is formed in the mind of the read who often attaches meanings to words that the author didn’t intend…
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Whoa. Meta. 😉
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Best contemplated over a large glass of wine.
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Andrew, a resounding YES! 😀 I’m hooked … how much have you written of the book? Do you know where it is going? Very exciting.
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I have written the first and last chapters, have a chapter outline, character studies and a bunch of research. It’s almost done – all I have to do is write it.
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Yes.
Write on Andrew, Write on.
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I will!
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Yes, I would read on. It makes it especially personal.
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Hopeful the story will live up to the promise of the intro.
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Yes. And will you begin Chapter 1?
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Actually, first and last chapters have been written – I just need to do all the parts in between.
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Beautiful writing. I always read the book jacket first, then the 1st paragraph of the 1st chapter, so… if I am interested enough by your book jacket to open the book, your intro would definitely compel me to read more. Have a great day.
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Thank you – now to see if my story can meet the promise of this intro.
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Well done, Andrew. Don’t stop now.
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as soon as I finish replying to comments, I’ll get back to working on this story.
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Thanks in advance. I’m starting to work my way through your book of poems. So far, so good.
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Thank you for taking the time to reading my book.
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I am intrigued!
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I’ll keep you updated on my progress.
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Please do! ❤️
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Yes, though you’ve now set the expectation that chapter one will immediately take hold of me and not let go. When that happens, I’m hooked. Nicely done.
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Exactly – there’s the risk. Can the story fulfill the promise of the opening. That’s where my doubt lies.
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Very unique. No one will stop reading because they fear it’s something they’ve already read ten times. How it fits–not sure of the genre. If it’s like your poetry–maybe literary fiction–you’re spot on!
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I wrote this for a post-apocalyptic novel I’m working on, but it might get moved to a poetry book I am working on. I was aiming for a literary style for the novel, but we’ll see where it ends up.
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Yes. You start with a strong hook. To be honest, this entire excerpt is strong.
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Thank for that. I wanted a strong hook.
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Yes. Absolutely.
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pressure’s on – now to write that book
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Yes.
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I’ll keep writing.
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🙂 Good!
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Yes, yes, yes! Beautiful! Why even the introduction pulses with life!
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Thanks!
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