A couple of months ago I joined a writer’s group at church. This is a local church we’ll be transferring our membership to so it seemed time to start joining some of their stuff. The writer’s group meets once a month with a suggested writing topic. This month there were two: Love and how have you changed your mind.
Couldn’t think of how I’ve changed my mind so I went with the topic I know even less about, love. Here’s the poem I read for group. Strangely enough, they said I could come back next month.
Love
You ask me to write of love.
What can I tell you that you don’t know?
Would something abstract do?
Shall I speak of the Greek – Agape, Eros, Philia, or pragma?
Perhaps I could sing you a love song – crooner, country, romantic, or perhaps a they done me wrong song.
What could I tell you?
What don’t you know?
The yearning of a single heart looking for that one.
The joy of the couple at the altar.
That look,
those words,
the touch …
Can I tell you of the heart ache when love is gone?
Of the emptiness when the mourners go home …
nights when no one calls
when grief becomes the world?
Perhaps I could tell you the great mysteries.
How love works,
or perhaps a list of all the great books of love.
The song is wrong you know.
There isn’t a book of love.
Not one, but thousands.
Books, poems, songs, sculpture, paintings, pictures …
What do I know of such things?
All I know is that in my life,
I’ve had family that loves me,
I’ve had beloved pets,
and twenty years ago, I found that one
who made my life complete.
I’ve decided that love is about creating, giving, working at, and holding onto when all else fails.
We can speak of it, but it is best felt and gently held where all can see.
I cannot write of love.
And yet…you did!
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and yet I managed it. 😉
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Oh, yes, you CAN write of love, and beautifully! I got teary-eyed. 🙂
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Thank you.
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It takes a poet to write about love. So in case you were in doubt, you are indeed a poet. 🙂
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There have been rumors about me being a poet. 😉
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You say, “I cannot write of love?” But you just did! And very thoughtfully, creatively, and eloquently, Andrew. My favorite line: “I’ve decided that love is about creating, giving, working at, and holding onto when all else fails.” That’s the crux of the matter, right there. Love isn’t just emotion; it’s action.
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Yes, love is action.
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Quite lovely. I’m not surprised that they invited you back. 🙂
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Thank you.
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Beautiful.
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Thank you.
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VERY nice! Thanks for sharing.
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Thanks – I just went back and reread it. Yeah, not bad.
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Well done! 💞
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Thank you.
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Standing applause from a poet. You’ve written what you experienced in your lifetime, condensed it into thought and emotion then wrapped it up for the reader to ponder and grow from. I’m glad they invited you back. Sharing in a writer’s group is not an easy task!
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I can be a challenge to share, because when you start to read it aloud to someone else, you start to notice all the problems with it.
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No wonder they want you back! Although your poem tries to deny knowledge about love, your poem is an eloquent confirmation.
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Thank you.
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