I haven’t been blogging much as other projects have been taking up all my headspace, but I thought I post this to see what you think. I’ve been working on a post-apocalyptic novel/story/thing for what seems like forever and recently have been revisiting this thing to see if I should continue or just give up.
Anyway, here is my opening paragraph along with a thing I’m putting at the beginning of each chapter. I’ve tried to write this a a liner story, but my story telling so far has been a bit fractured so I’m just owning that and showing two fractured pieces. The working title is North and East and is about a city that has grown out of the ruins of the California coast near San Luis Obispo.
On this Date in History:[1]
In 2094 Lt Col David West lead the 35th Homeland Guard Regiment in the battle of Soledad which established the northern frontier of the City for the next 50 years until his grandson, Col Jose West, lead the 1st City Regiment which included elements of the 2nd City Calvary, 1st Homeland Guard Battalion and was supported by four airplanes from the Vandenberg Fixed Wing Squadron in the battles of Salinas and Monterey thereby securing the whole length of the Salinas River Valley for the City on the very same day in 2144.
[1] From the Vandenberg Times, May 24, 2277
Chapter One: City at Night
The explosion ripped through the empty restaurant, shattering windows, cups, plates, and sent the remains of a door flying into the dark street. In the silence after the blast, alarms started their cry, fire sprinklers started, and a broken water pipe shot a fine stream of water into the celling of the small storage room where the explosives had been hidden. A ruptured gas line in the wall hissed and methane filled the air with a musty rotten egg fragrance just before a second blast sent flames into the night.
Sargent Owens was staring at the time on his computer screen waiting for it to click over to 04:00, so he could leave the command room and have his lunch. At 03:57 his screen burst to life, and six voices were demanding his attention over his headset. Whatever it was, it was big and his crew of dispatchers were shocked into life as alarm after alarm filled the screens and headsets.
So fellow bloggers, let me know what you think. Would you read more of this silliness?